Tuesday, October 1, 2013

Abiding Blog 1 Gabriella Maddaloni


While reading these poems, there were quotes from a few of them that reminded me of both Full Body Burden and Parable of the Sower.  In “the Removal,” one quote stood out to me the most as pertaining to Full Body Burden.  “…Better to sacrifice the few than let the many die” directly relates to the government and to how I always assumed what the government was feeling when it came to Rocky Flats (18).  When I picture Rocky Flats, I imagine it was designed to look just like any other factory.  I imagine it just as was described in “Genesis,” they build “…a chain-link fence around it all to keep the secret (37). 
            Some lines in “the Fence” strongly reminded me of Parable of the Sower.  I can almost imagine Lauren’s fear of the people on the outside breaking through her community’s wall all over again within the last stanza.  “Our parents say they’re in lands far away… but we know better.  They are here.  We feel them pressing on the fence.  We sense they want what’s hidden here.  But if they don’t get ‘it’ they won’t get us. We’re sheltered in the secret and free to play as long as we stay inside the fence (39).
            The point of the collection of poems, I found in the afterword.  Awiakta’s purpose was to unite “seemingly opposing worlds…the sacred and the scientific.  It is a spiritual union, the reconciling of opposites, to which her poetry gives full expression.”  Upon reading this, “Pine Ridge: Pilgrimage to the Prophet” comes to mean something more in my mind.  It isn’t just about John being in a museum; it explains much more.  “He’s in a museum.  By a giant atom with electrons whirling round it like tiny azure stars, there he sits – sketched leaning on his cane.  His prophecy came true.  They’ve hung pictures to show it’s so”  (52). This is a subtler way to show “where atom and mountain meet” (65).  A religious prophetic man next to a great science-based structure; it literally is where opposing worlds are united, within the same place, the same room, next to each other.  

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